Meter Reads Film Critique No. 2

I really liked the graphics, you are doing a great job here. I can really see how this would be huge project to take on.

I thought that the Fns were not smoothly flowing and didn't always move from right to left at the same speed, and seemed to have little hitches or hangups in them, I think a realistic FN is more smoothly flowing.

I thought the tick looked more like a small fall, not 1/8" but 1/4"

The sound at the end of each read I would think should be less loud compared to the background music, it is a little jarring. I thought the other critiques I read here, Randy and Pat's were useful.

Your work is much appreciated!

Love,

Trey