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Actually Lauren has found it also, but said she would keep our secret. She really loved what you are doing. I just got a new picture for 1962 which I will upload tonight and e-mail you the text and where it goes in the bio. You're doing a really great job!
On the intro of Yvonne reading The New Dawn the first part has sections that are fuzzy (her voice) (either clipping or over modulation). Also I'd prefer the last picture to be of Yvonne as that stays after the video runs. Maybe place Ron up front when Yvonne introduces him.